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发布时间:2022-09-27 文章来源:https://www.classbro.com/

留学生论文写作中,Run-on Sentence 和Comma Splice 是写作时常见的两种错误;但很多时候导师即使指出该句属于该类错误,很多同学也不理解他们的意思,也不知道该如何处理。本文万能班长将带同学们了解这两类语法错误,并为大家提供这两种错误的解决办法,同学们可以收藏码住~

先看三个错误例子:

Example of a run-on sentence:

× The results of the study were inconclusive, more research needs to be done on the topic.

以上分别是两个独立的句子,但是两个句子间却没有任何的衔接方式(衔接词,标点符号等)隔开,这属于经典 run-on sentence。

Example of a comma splice:

× Participants could leave the study at any time, they needed to indicate their preference.

以上分别是两个独立的句子,虽然有了逗号隔开,但依旧是错误的,这属于run-on sentence的一种:comma splice。

× Example of a longer run-on sentence:

Toni Morrison is a professor at Princeton University, she wrote the novel The Bluest Eye.

Revision (修订版)

1. 用一个句号隔开:

√ The results of the study were inconclusive. More research needs to be done on the topic.

√ Participants could leave the study at any time. They needed to indicate their preference.

2. 用分号隔开

√ The results of the study were inconclusive; more research needs to be done on the topic.

√ Participants could leave the study at any time; they needed to indicate their preference.

3. 用一个逗号加一个并列连接词 (e.g. and, but, or ...)

√ The results of the study were inconclusive, and more research needs to be done on the topic.

√ Participants could leave the study at any time, and they needed to indicate their preference.

4. 如果两句间存在逻辑关系(因果,转折,对比等) 的话,把其中一个句子加上从属连词 (e.g. because, unless, although ...) 使其成为一个从句,与另外一个句子共同构成并列句。

√ The results of the study were inconclusive, so more research needs to be done on the topic.

注意:therefore 尽管是因此的意思,但由于其是副词,不像because, so 等有连词的词性;因此并不能使用逗号与前句相连。正确的做法有两种:

A. 分号隔开

√ The results of the study were inconclusive; therefore more research needs to be done on the topic.

B. 句号隔开

√ The results of the study were inconclusive. Therefore, more research needs to be done on the topic.

5. 如果你认为一个句子的信息的重要性低于另外一个句子的话,可以将其写成从句(同位语,定语)

√ Toni Morrison, a professor at Princeton University, wrote The Bluest Eye.

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